Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 19, 2020
The red ball
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Flynn its Honey here! Wow this Post is amazing and I love the story board. Oh and before you post maybe check your spelling. But anyway I bet your good at spelling anyway. Other than that its really good!
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ReplyDeleteYipee the dog Ralph! We think this is a very cool name don't we Flynn? (haha) You are very clever with this storyboard and the way you link your ideas together, great job!
Ms Catton
Hi Flynn. I really like your storyboard- great work! I will have to get you to show me how you do it!! Remember how we talked over lockdown about checking your spelling and punctuation to make it easy for the reader to follow? Don't forget to edit before you publish. Very proud of you. Love Mum x
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