Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 5, 2020
My dream house
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Hello, Hello, Hello Flynn! Its Honey here. I love your dream house so much I would love to live there. The only thing I question about is why is there a couch next to a pool? Also maybe move the swing to the ground next time because its quite dangerous. Otherwise its beautiful!
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Hi Flynn
ReplyDeleteYour house looks so cool how it has four pools and a two story house I wish I could live there.Smart thinking having a couch on the top story so at night you can look at the stars.
Good morning Flynn, my name is Ros, from Waikowhai primary school, it's really cool how your sharing your imagination with us, it feels good when think out of the box, right? I really like the way how you build your house, it looks cool and rich, blog you later!
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