Have you ever read The Wind in the Willows? I have and I liked it. This all my work that I have done in reading time for Wind in the Willows in term 2. Is there anything I can improve on? Please tell me in the comments, your feedback is important. Do you like my stop motion animation about my favourite part in Wind in the Willows?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, July 2, 2019
Wonderful Wind in the Willows
Have you ever read The Wind in the Willows? I have and I liked it. This all my work that I have done in reading time for Wind in the Willows in term 2. Is there anything I can improve on? Please tell me in the comments, your feedback is important. Do you like my stop motion animation about my favourite part in Wind in the Willows?
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hi flynn for the Stop mocean did you think about having a background like standing it beside a while and then putting a whiteboard
ReplyDeleteKia ora Flynn. I enjoyed your stop motion, I wonder if you could have made a wee car out of lego to make it 3D? Remember to proofread your work before publishing! Keep up the great work Love Mum
ReplyDeletehi i think this is really good u did well by putting in a lot of information
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