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Tuesday, July 2, 2019

Wonderful Wind in the Willows


Have you ever read The Wind in the Willows? I have and I liked it. This all my work that I have done in reading time for Wind in the Willows in term 2. Is there anything I can improve on? Please tell me in the comments, your feedback is important. Do you like my stop motion animation about my favourite part in Wind in the Willows?

3 comments:

  1. hi flynn for the Stop mocean did you think about having a background like standing it beside a while and then putting a whiteboard

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  2. Kia ora Flynn. I enjoyed your stop motion, I wonder if you could have made a wee car out of lego to make it 3D? Remember to proofread your work before publishing! Keep up the great work Love Mum

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  3. hi i think this is really good u did well by putting in a lot of information
    alexie

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